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Thesis statement
Therefore, in order not to depend on thermal generation and nuclear energy, the Japanese government should encourage the Japanese citizens and companies to save energy more actively, adopt policies to save energy and promote renewable energy.

Outline

I Introduction
A) background information
B) thesis statement

II the problems of thermal generation
A) the risk of Japanese depending on fossil fuels
B) the risk of promoting the global warming

III the problems of nuclear generation
A) nuclear waste
B) security problems
1) the accidents
2) international relations

IV the methods how to save the energy
A) decreasing the waste of energy
B) model of european countries

V renewable energy
A) the possibility of renewable energy in Japan
B) the difficulty of renewable energy in Japan

VI Conclusion